One day jack went hunting he was in the forest where he caught all of his hunting he normally uses a gun but not this time he is using the bola and the bow and arrow he went to his spot were he got his bunny rabbits he was waiting for about half an hour until he saw what he came for the bunny was drinking out of the Creek as jack as jack gets ready to throw his bola he threw his bola and it raped around the bunny's legs he could move the bunny was struggling but he finally got out
THE End...
The bola is something the native Americans used to give them a chance to kill there pray. It can be used on birds and land animals.
Cool story Enzo, you'll have to show me the Bola you made. Don't forget punctuation and to proof read but Goodwood son!
ReplyDeleteOops I need to proof read aswell! Haha I meant good work!😊
ReplyDeleteHi Enzo Great Story! The thing what you can improve on is punctuation because I dont see to much of it. Over all I really liked your story
ReplyDeleteKia ora Enzo,
ReplyDeleteAmazing story it sounds just like you next make sure you're writing doesn't go out of the page and try to make it a bit longer but other than that it is amazing keep up the good work!