Explanation writing.

w.a.l.t.write an explanation of writing. This term for writing we are focusing on explanation writing like this one. Did you know that bees are very important to our planet? Also bees collect pollen and nectar in the spring because the flowers are in bloom. They suck up all the nectar using their proboscis. This a straw like tong




They fly back to the comb with the nectar in their stomach. They mix it with proteins in their stomach and it turns it into honey then they spit the honey into other worker bees mouths until it’s sticky then they store the honey in a comb and beat their wings to get the stickiness out. And then put a bees made wax on top now the beast of finished making honey people take the honey and prepare it for sale



Did you know that bees are very important to our planet? Also bees collect pollen and nectar in the spring because the flowers are in bloom. They suck up all the nectar using their proboscis. This a straw like tong


They fly back to the comb with the nectar in their stomach. They mix it with proteins in their stomach and it turns it into honey then they spit the honey into other worker bees mouths until it’s sticky then they store the honey in a comb and beat their wings to get the stickiness out. And then put a bees made wax on top now the beast of finished making honey people take the honey and prepare it for sale

I am proud of my writing because it has some detail and next time i will try to make it better and eye caching and also i used capital letters and full stops.