Writing task
W.A.L.T up load our writing task and write about it. Last week at school we planned our writing. Our writing was our favourite place to go; I choose my big hill. With a sheet we did our introduction, then we used our senses to form our paragraphs; see, hear, smell, feel and taste. After that we did the summary. Here is a picture.
What did I enjoy? I enjoyed writing the looks paragraph because the hill has lots of looks.
What did I do well? I think I did well with the paragraphs I added lot of info.
What could I improve on? I think I could improve on getting more information in there.
I found that very interesting Enzo, there was lots of description in there. And what you did was great it looks really well thought-out. Hope to see more of your fantastic work from Beau.ππππ
ReplyDeleteHi Enzo,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Mahdi from Waikowhai Primary School. I really liked how you are writing really nice introductions about your favorite place to go. Maybe next time you could write about a different place you have visited?
Bye!My favorite place to is go to the habar bridge