I am learning to write about the text I am reading. 
today our task was to write a summary about bok choy.
Bok choy is a book by paul mason. There are some characters in this story. Ah sum mrs bishop william Jacob and his mother.
Bok choy is a book by paul mason. There are some characters in this story. Ah sum mrs bishop william Jacob and his mother.
Jacob was helping his mother stack firewood when William and Mrs bishop came out. Ah sum past he sells vegetables b ok choy chinese cabbage Mrs bishop calls them jacob's mum came out with some coins for ah sum Jacob's mum was a regular costermur a sum went off. Jacob decides to go fishing but he slips and falls in the water. It didn't take time for the water to catch Jacob. with the water rippling through his legs the water carrying he tried to get to the rocks but the current pulled him and his body slammed against them. He woke up and saw that he was in a darkened hut and realised it was ah sum. He tried to get up but ah sum laid him back down. ‘’ mother come soon ‘’ said ah sum. Jacobs mother came and on the way home mrs bishop caught them and Jacobs mother stood up for ah sum.
Nice job but remember to see if your spelling is correct still cool
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Hey Enzo,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you described the story it's self as well as upload a story board to give a picture to the reader and help keep them engaged. Keep up the good work.
I was wondering, if you were in the situation of Jacob, would you have done anything different?
Sincerely, Dr. Joshua D. B.
Hi Enzo Kade her i really like your post and i really like how you summarize it😊👍. And that is a lot of writeing you did good And just a quick questionon did you yous story borad that to summarizese it? becuse if you did we did that in our class.
ReplyDeleteHello Enzo, Jaspa here. Your story board looks great and I love how you've written so much to match with your story board. Although you forgot to put a capital letter for Mrs Bishop. And why did Mrs Bishop call Jacob's food Jacob's? And what would you do if you were stuck in a current in the stream?
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