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Tuesday 26 May 2020

free writing

He tied his boat off and started to climb the cliffs of mystery island. New no one lived to see to tell what was behind the cloud but he still climbed. As the rocks tumbled and crumbled down the rivets of mystery hill the thunder and lighting gave him the hebe jebes. as got to the top there was a big cloud that stopped him in his footsteps. He creepeed in and what he saw was horrifying. It was popping and boiling hot lava so ran down and he made his way down mystery hill. 



That was our writing task for to day we had to finish our writing task from yeastier day. 

4 comments:

  1. Hello Enzo,
    Wow how did you get the idea of this? This was very interesting to read because when I was reading it I wanted to know what was going to happen when he got to the top of the hill/mountain. Did you make up this story? Do you enjoy doing free writing?

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  3. Nice story!!!

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  4. hello enzo I love your story it reminds me it looks like bear grills

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